You know it's going to be a busy morning when you wake up with the opening sentence rattling around in your head. (Yes, this text started de novo at 8 this morning.)
And, true to form (at least for what works for me), this is my third draft on the briefest of briefs. I'll likely go through two more, specifically to work on the last two paragraphs, before Friday, when this sucker's due. This is the hardcore one, where a certain vocabulary level is assumed. If you need a refresher, look through this entry. Page count is 1 and 1/3, which is acceptable.
As before, let the comments fly. If something's not clear, that's something I have to work on. Thanks.
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And, true to form (at least for what works for me), this is my third draft on the briefest of briefs. I'll likely go through two more, specifically to work on the last two paragraphs, before Friday, when this sucker's due. This is the hardcore one, where a certain vocabulary level is assumed. If you need a refresher, look through this entry. Page count is 1 and 1/3, which is acceptable.
As before, let the comments fly. If something's not clear, that's something I have to work on. Thanks.
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